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Greg Mortenson’s trajectory as a somewhat obsessed, albeit highly
productive, humanitarian who has built more than 50 schools in Pakistan
begins with a small twist of fate. A drifting and somewhat obsessed
mountain climber mourning the death of his youngest sister, he decides
to summit K2 to honor her memory. A successful rescue mission of one of
his teammates, however, costs Mortenson the summit, as well as his
strength. Separated from his porter, weakened and eventually in the
care of the village of Korphe, Mortenson’s true journey—and tribute to
his sister—begins.
Korphe has no school. Rather, children gather on “a vast, open ledge
eight hundred feet above the Braldu (Valley).” The Pakistani government
does not provide a teacher, and the village cannot afford one, so they
share a teacher with a neighboring village. He comes three days a week,
and otherwise the children are on their own, kneeling on the ground,
“left alone to practice the lessons he has left behind.” Making an
impulsive promise to return and build a school for Korphe, Mortenson’s
life suddenly changes. Living between his car in California and small
hotels near Islamabad, learning how to use a computer and to pray in
both Sunni and Shia styles, Mortenson builds the foundation for what is
to become the Central Asia Institute.
Mortenson also sips tea with Taliban leaders, survives more than one
fatwa and a kidnapping, and earns the “permission, blessings and
prayers” of the Supreme Council of Ayatollahs, the world’s foremost
Shia authority. Most importantly, Mortenson realizes the global
importance of balanced education in such poverty- and war-stricken
regions as Kashmir, where the only hope for many children is within the
walls of madrassas, Islamic fundamentalist schools, an estimated 20
percent of which have radicalized Islam and operate as training grounds
for the likes of the Taliban and al Qaeda.
Journalist David Oliver Relin deserves credit for co-authoring this
inspiring story. He accompanied Mortenson to northern Pakistan on three
occasions, flying “on helicopters that should have been hanging from
the rafters of museums.” The writing posed its own difficulties:
neither Mortenson nor the Balti people who inhabit these mountains rely
on a linear sense of time. The villagers’ language actually employs no
tenses, presenting a serious challenge to establishing a chronology of
events.
Relin traveled and worked with Mortenson for two years, but beyond the
introduction, his character is entirely absent from the text, making it
impossible to distinguish events or dialogue that he documented from
those recreated for him. This creates a subtle lack of clarity,
underscored by his admission that, ultimately, he prioritized passion
over objectivity.
“… And after staying up at all-night jirgas with village elders and
weighing in on proposals for new projects,” Relin writes, “or showing a
classroom full of excited 8-year-old girls how to use the first pencil
sharpener anyone has ever cared to give them … it is impossible to
remain simply a reporter.” Citing a character in Graham Greene’s “The
Quiet American,” he continues, “… Sometimes, to be human, you have to
take sides.”
Participant observation is not new to documentary studies, and in many
cases is an author’s most ethical course of action. Relin’s
introduction, however, implies that he took this one step further.
Perhaps allowing himself into the story’s text or sharing his research
methodology with readers may have helped distinguish between documented
and retold events, and led to a greater sense of trust in his
narration. As it is, those unknown differences between what he observed
and what was recounted for him loom like ledges of the deep and rugged
valleys Relin tries so hard to describe.
It is within this stark territory that Mortenson realizes it’s not just
Korphe that needs a school. The government allotment for all the remote
villages is siphoned off by corruption on its way from the capital, and
not just in Pakistan. By the end of the book, we learn that Mortenson
is nearly doubling CAI’s operations with a move into Afghanistan.
“There has been far too much dying in these hills,’ says Commandhan
Sadhar Khan to Mortenson. In Badakshan, a town “as far from Kabul as
one could get in Afghanistan,” absolute power resides with Khan; he is
as well known for funneling opium tariffs back to his people in the
form of small loans or public projects as he is for literally pulling
his enemy apart between two jeeps if he does not surrender. “Every
rock, every boulder that you see before you is one of my mujahadeen,
shahids, martyrs, who sacrificed their lives fighting the Russians and
the Taliban,” Khan says. “Now we must make their sacrifice
worthwhile. We must turn these stones into schools.”
Throughout the story, Relin’s narration and syntax can be cumbersome,
and the reader’s path is too often strewn with misplaced modifiers not
to stumble and swear. Combined with a slight sense of vertigo from the
aforementioned hazy timeline and perspective, reading “Three Cups of
Tea” can, in moments, feel rather like climbing a mountain.
That said, who has ever struggled to a summit and not been pleased to
have reached the top? Just as no mere words can do justice to the
majestic topography of the Karakoram Mountains, neither can slightly
imperfect writing diminish the grandeur of this story. One feels
humbled and awestruck at the magnitude of what Mortenson has
accomplished, and, like a hiker in the center of a vast and jagged
valley, ready to get moving.
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